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Joshua_Wesner

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2019-12-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
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    Its very cliche and the MC is dumb enough Just to make the story move slower then needed was hoping for more then i should have based on the start of it

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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Commented

    So convient

    < Hand to hand combat Lv. 1 Will now be shown >
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    My Vampire System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Commented

    Imma drop this here i like the concept reminded me of re:monster but there is just to much plot armor and I know tou hd a disclaimer about your grammar but it really is bad and it throws me off when im reading

    Ch 6 Fighting Kobolds
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Commented

    Dont you love convience story fixes when a problem arises

    He recalled one of the most powerful and advanced countries in the world, the Mechanic Country. The Mechanic Country had that technology. A technology where he could freely converse to other people even without knowing their language. That technology could translate thousands of languages around the world.
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Replied to TrippleSix

    Yes, You can very much have one without the other not all places eat food in the same way with the same sides

    "Hmm... Although I've just arrived here yesterday, it feels like I haven't eaten seafood for a long time."
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Commented

    Im sure later on he is gonna find out a plce here as rice and have a crazy obession with getting it cause he misses it so so much -_-

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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Commented

    Brushed against his face i know you must still be learning english or something so i dont want to be to critical just wanted to point this out for next time

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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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  • Joshua_Wesner
    Joshua_Wesner3yr
    Replied to Dakratas

    You care more then most native english speakers

    Ch 1 I've become a goblin
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    The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak
    Fantasy · DonnEll
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