Justheguy
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Justheguy2yrPostedI like the world building and world setting you've first introduced. Space, some history behind the cadet's backgrounds makes it to hook the reader in. I quite like it. Still, you put way too many commars (,) and make the sentences pause and pause interrupting the story dialogue. Just imagine as if you're the one talking and narrating the story. Thx I gotta go bye!
- Justheguy2yrReplied to Not_ayinCh 70 Terrifying Fate of Purple Bananas
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Any thoughts or comments? Please give your opinions on this chapter.
This chapter has been deleted. - Justheguy3yrReplied to DaoistSoulDive
Well, it has to do with his Semblance that effected him...
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No, that was Last Jedi.
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After all, it wouldn't be interesting if he became a baby-snatching, brainwashing, sociapath serving "the Light", instead of lightning-throwing, planet-killing, badass Dark Lord of the Sith. But he ain't Revan, I can tell you that. Man's too badass to die.
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Please comment your thoughts of this chapter. I would like to hear your opinions.
This chapter has been deleted. - Justheguy3yrReplied to Lustsifer
No, it's dead I'm afraid. Life happened. I wasn't eager to continue this story because I felt disappointed from it. Though, I'm working on a new different fanfic, its called RWBY: Jedi of Skywalker if you want to check it out.
[AN: Due to his experience of the multiverse, Mark is very almost undetectable since he learnt from the Masters of the Shadows such as: Shinobi, League of Shadows, Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Spartans (Halo), Kingsman Agents, The Creed (Assassin's Creed), John Wick, and the Dark Knight (Batman).] - Justheguy3yrReplied to Lustsifer
Enemy Ninja POV: Yo why is there a blond kid wearing bright orange jumpsuit in the middle of the night-
[AN: Due to his experience of the multiverse, Mark is very almost undetectable since he learnt from the Masters of the Shadows such as: Shinobi, League of Shadows, Sherlock Holmes (Movie), Spartans (Halo), Kingsman Agents, The Creed (Assassin's Creed), John Wick, and the Dark Knight (Batman).] - Justheguy3yrCommented
"DOUBLE KILL!"
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Eh, whenever.
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https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=t0imaSCnSuA&ab_channel=AriannaStewart
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She's not in Hell, she's saying that this world feels like Hell
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E. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Yeah, sure. Why not.
F!!! - Justheguy3yrReplied to BatCorn_Hi
Well, Mark couldn't kill him. Who's to say Yang would?
And I just realised that her eyes were staring at me. Giving an awkward look to Yang (even though she's dead) I slowly dropped her arm and closed her eyes. Rest in Peace. You may be the worst character, but you don't deserve this kind of shit. - Justheguy3yrReplied to MannyTheManticore
Fook. I didn't know.
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https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=YoaU3kRFvLg&ab_channel=DannyElfman-Topic
[AN: The Batman Theme · Danny Elfman plays] (slowly reading this text is recommended while listening to the music) - Justheguy3yrReplied to David_DrakeCh 37 The Most Dangerous Beast in the Entire Multiverse
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