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The_Olympians_Rule

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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule5d
    Replied to shirou_sureiya

    He’s an officer. You need someone to be reasonable, or else it’s just the blind leading the blind 😂

    "I only read a few comics and I'm pretty sure Wolverine isn't even that strong… I'm fucked, aren't I?... Though at least I'm biologically immortal… I think," I say out loud again almost trying to convince myself this isn't real. 
    Wolverine in The Boys
    TV · Anomander_Adaar
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule13d
    Commented

    yes👍

    (A/N: Comment if I should do an R-18, not really use to doing them, but I can try if you want it.)
    Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
    Movies · Flaming_Lines
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule4mth
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    Never heard of these domains/abilities of Hades. Are these actual domains or something you add? And if so where did you read about them?

    God of Forbidden Knowledge: Being the Deity responsible for holding forbidden knowledge, Hades is seen as a holder of both helpful and destructive expertise. Hades is known for using the allure of forbidden knowledge to lure people into servitude. Is Not only knowledge like lost magics and rituals part of Hade's domain but also any secrets or plots that may be occurring; this has led to Hades being prayed to by rulers and politicians in hopes of uncovering plots. Hades' domain over forbidden knowledge has led him to be considered one of the wisest of the Gods and often seen as the Patron of Secrets.
    Reborn as Hades In PJO
    Book&Literature · TheGreekMythosGuru
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule6mth
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    Dagger?

    I walked with My rifle in it's sling and a dagger in hand to find some food once I was done looting the armory for weapons and clothes.
    Evil Degenerate Reborn in The Walking Dead
    TV · SERBMADHAUS
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule6mth
    Replied to Ilikefords44445555

    Is this from a game?

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    The Legion (A Walking Dead Fanfiction)
    TV · Ilikefords44445555
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule6mth
    Replied to Ilikefords44445555

    Is this supposed to be the legionaries?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    The Legion (A Walking Dead Fanfiction)
    TV · Ilikefords44445555
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule6mth
    Commented

    There is a thing as too much description.

    "Rargh", groaning incomprehensible sounds, he fell to his knees while staring vacantly at the trees. Trying to push himself forward in hopes of reaching the singing tree but try as he may, he couldn't exert as small a force to tilt his head in its direction. With every struggle, the sounds grew dimmer until the forest was bathed in a downpour of silence - total silence. A silence so heavy that even the insects sang in its muted melody leaving only the beating of a heart to echo through the forest as the owner fell into slumber.
    TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN
    TV · Draul_TheOminous
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Commented

    I should have predicted you would have come ☝️🤓

    "Robin? The boy wonder? I should have predicted that you would come," said Jordan.
    The New Titans: A Teen Titans Story
    TV · sergeantmeat69
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Commented

    No one talks like this. Especially not kids? TF 🤨

    "There's no need to bully us, Ryder. We want to get our education as well," said Darius.
    The New Titans: A Teen Titans Story
    TV · sergeantmeat69
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Replied to HaremGodZ

    Wow, good come back.

    Game of Thrones: Dragon Overlordd
    TV · HaremGodZ
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Posted

    Speeds past everything and the writing/dialogue is very broken.

    Targaryen Who Turned Dragon (Against The Gods X Game Of Thrones)
    Book&Literature · SovereignOfHeaven
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Commented

    Why does uncle Ben always have to die 😢

    She looked at him tearfully "It's your Uncle, he was in an accident at work, he's in the hospital now... I don't know if he'll make it" she said before breaking down and sobbing once again.
    Being Spider-Man is a Sacrifice || Marvel x MCU Fic
    Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Replied to IMPAiLER
    'And Sansa is here with me, Sansa, Fathers favourite princess the mini Lady Stark and now she's here with me in a place I don't know.
    Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
    Book&Literature · TheManUnderTheBed
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Posted

    Couldn’t get past the second chapter, every other paragraph is, “I’m a soldier, I was trained for this.” Or about training he was given that no troops but special forces get. To cringe and is relaying way to heavily on the whole ‘trained soldier’.

    Becoming King of the Wildling's in GOT
    TV · Dr_Dred
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Replied to The_Olympians_Rule

    If you actually have dyslexia try grammerly or a proof reader/editor. Hope you keep writing and improving.

    (ASOIAF/GOT) EVIL DEGENERATE REBORN IN GAME OF THRONES
    Book&Literature · SERBMADHAUS
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
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    That’s the third Valyrian sword he just gave away. Swords so expensive they could be traded for armies. And your MC is using two normal steel katanas, that aren’t going to do anything against real armor. Rest of the story has been really good so this part really annoys me. Stop being a weeb and use the strongest sword type there is. Harry is from magical Britain why he wants to use a katana any way I have no clue. He’s used the Gryfindor sword before, he should be familiar with long swords.

    Aryan had gifted the Valyrian steel sword to Wylis Manderly, who was even now admiring the new sword of House Manderly. He gave Roose the money they had received for their surrender by Lord Harlaw. Soon they were near Pyke and saw that the ships surrounding Pyke were the Manderly fleet and the Royal fleet, the latter's presence surprised him. They were ahead of schedule. Stannis must be given more credit than due for achieving that. Soon the Marauder docked and Aryan got down.
    Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms
    Book&Literature · ElderKwon
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Posted

    Another wish fulfillment plus anime powers in GoT. Anime and GoT thrones doesn’t mix well, for me at least. And the cherry on top, poor grammar. Which on this cite isn’t surprising.

    Game of Thrones: Dragon Overlordd
    TV · HaremGodZ
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule7mth
    Posted

    Horrible English. Nothing else to really say, it’s just bad.

    (ASOIAF/GOT) EVIL DEGENERATE REBORN IN GAME OF THRONES
    Book&Literature · SERBMADHAUS
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule8mth
    Commented

    Do you know English?

    " Charlie is not home... I cant smell his scent. And I cant hear his breathing. Probably he is in the police station . "
    Werewolf İn Twilight
    Movies · Lazyauthor46
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  • The_Olympians_Rule
    The_Olympians_Rule8mth
    Commented

    😐

    "I don't know. I just felt something pulling me towards the woods, so I snuck out, and when I got there, once the moon hit its peak, I suddenly felt an energy erupt from my stomach and spread throughout my body, bringing excruciating pain. When it was over, I found a ball of energy right below my navel within my body, which I assume to be the magic that you are talking about, Mother." I tell her hoping she misses the lies in my explanation.
    Life of Ace Mikaelson (the originals fanfic
    TV · LonerZN
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