Nickolas_T

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+1

You have already written yourself too deep. I like the idea of a plot focused story but if that is what you want to write it would be best to start from scratch. That being said I am already invested in this story and would love it if you would see it through to the end.

If he has the code then he should loose his geass ability in exchange for immortality.

This story was a bit of a mess but i still enjoyed it and hope that you try again.