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GREAT PROSE. Lowkey, loving the story. The characters are more fun than what I am used to. And, if we being real, never seen much of this type of setting here. And this system too. No idea if it just me, but it a nice addition frfr.

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The narration of this pure gold. Literally. The system status is new and not a bore to read(like some other ones.) Very curious on why what happened to Mc. Will keeping do find out

Gng. I just found peak. Actual peak. Beautiful writing. Great story. And the character, God character. An ACTUAL UNIT. The progressions is great, the female characters are great. Respectfully, it's excellent. Upload faster. More. More

This a pretty fun book. Lovedddd the light-hearted narration and story. The description went hard ngl, fancy fancy words. The great grammar is a nice plus, so I all await for the waifus and adventures. 5/5

The atmosphere and theme is fire, reminds me of eastern magic, not xianxia but related. There’s stakes and tension, instead of letting the Mc grovel in some corner, jk. After reading the chaps and introduction of mysterious person, yeah this will be a good story. Though the parts that stuck weirdly was the pacing, a bit dragged, which might be intentional but who knows. And dialogues just need more spunk, more easy-following, at earlier first chaps, but other chaps did not have this. That’s it, happy writing, author. Happy reading, reader.

HUAHAHAHAHA! | HAVE TAKEN THE FIRST REVIEW. BOW! BOW! Jokes aside, maybe. I liked the concept and character, the mystery. Pizzazzzz. Some parts may feel wobbly, some things rushed and squeezy— even such inconveniences might just be the experience too. So 5 for you, and 5 for everyone. And 10 for me because always rate yourself higher. Happy reading.

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