story is good but instead using literal translations they could use pokemon names to make the story flow more smoothly. it frustrating that they use literal translations and Chang how they describe the pokemon six times per paragraph it seems

gun stupid. literal translations are really annoying

just call it krabby or Kingler please and thank you. no need for literal translation

Mr author please stop wasting word counts with your notes being as long as a chapter. if you need tonsay something please prepare a separate chapter for it

feels like the systems getting too involved in the story

the emotion cons are a annoying and break story flow

this story has good character development and world background setting. The story though does not develop at all. Author said slow but so far no real story. It just repeats the same slice of life arc over and over in different settings no real adventure and no focus on pokemon

well that is one heck of a start

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seems interesting

good story. good story flow. good characters. interesting concept. has me hooked from first chapterwish to see more character progression. hope story keeps going

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good story

cool