Exzistential

A normal thing any human would do here is read his class. but no, for the convenience of plot...he won't. Not until later.

which had upgraded Yara's

Like waves striking the seabed?

both of those were not inside the S rank Gate

he had been looking for a* staff or sword

It should either be "Just a foot away" or "Just a few* feet away"

losses*

This is what I can't stand. one of these people was definitely male. Why are all of them being described as women now?

before someone stripped us of* our points

This is such a pointless perspective to write from. Like, who cares about these guys and are they going to be repeat characters? What's the point of writing from their perspective? Seems like filler.