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Dreamingof1613hReplied to ColorfulAutumnWindSorry, its just that somethings are just understood đ
The black raven stared at him for a few seconds, then crow once, flapped its wings, and flew away. Jian Yi watched the black raven fly away for a moment, then looked at the administrative building thoughtfully.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind- Dreamingof1615hCommentedDuan Yixin nodded, then climbed onto the bullock cart and sat down with her bamboo basket on her side. Since she was the only customer today, Sun Dagou didn't talk. Just as the bullock cart drove out of Chunshan Town, Jian Yi also left Chunshan Town and followed them secretly.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind
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Like here, everything is described in too much details. It could have been: "The black raven stared at him for few seconds before flying away" (No offense, it is just too detailed)
The black raven stared at him for a few seconds, then crow once, flapped its wings, and flew away. Jian Yi watched the black raven fly away for a moment, then looked at the administrative building thoughtfully.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof1615hCommented
Every step does not need to be described. It is too step by step
He raised his head, looked up at the sky, and let out a long whistle. Soon, a black raven approached him from a distance. He raised his left arm and waited for the black raven to land.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof1616hCommented
Hey, dude, you should have introduced yourself. Come dont't be stalker, it is weird
When Duan Yixin walked away, Jian Yi put down the empty bowl. He took out two copper coins, put them on the table, picked up his sword, and followed her.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof1616hCommented
Huh? Wasn't seats empty? Did this guy do something?
Hearing this, Duan Yixin looked around, and sure enough, only her table had an empty seat. She tilted her head slightly and thought, 'This wanton business is not bad. So many empty seats were actually filled in just a few minutes.'detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof1616hCommented
Guess now she can finally do her repairs đ
After calculating the total, Tan Lidan said, "Including the one thousand and five hundred taels of silver to buy the ginseng, the total is one thousand and nine hundred and seventy-two taels of silver. Since Miss Duan also gave us the information about the medicinal herb's location, our Chang Shou Pharmacy will pay a total of two thousand and five hundred taels of silver."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof1616hCommented
How many did she ate by now? Won't it cause stomach acheđ¤
After finishing speaking, he whispered something to the waiting servant. In the meantime, Duan Yixin waited while enjoying the osmanthus cake and tea. After a while, the servant came back with a set of four treasures of the study. He placed them on the table next to her and stepped aside.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dReplied to ColorfulAutumnWind
Yes sorry, I meant left by Duan Yixin's mother for her
Knowing that this might be the last time they could see each other, Zhao Xiaohua said, "This jade pendant was left for Duan Yixin by Duan Mengling. She said it was a love token given to her by her late husband. After your paternal aunt died, Mother stole this jade pendant before your grandfather found out about it. Now, the only ones who know about this jade pendant are only you and me."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
It is sad that he was controlled and I am glad he does not have bad intentions. But he might be too late by the time he get iver the controlling thing
He must pass the county examination as soon as possible so he can leave the village and avoid Liang Jiaying. As for Duan Yixin, he will come back and marry her after he solves the problem of being controlled and passes the imperial examination. Because of his guilt, Tang Zizheng wanted to give her the best and let her spend the rest of her life without worry.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
Good advice from the frd
After a long silence, Jiang Haolin said, "Zizheng, you should let her go. Since you have chosen Miss Liang, you shouldn't have other thoughts about Xin Niang."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dReplied to ColorfulAutumnWind
Talking too much and jealousy ? So basically women were expected to be robots 𤨠Wth!!
Madam Chi sighed and nodded, "That is right. After her husband died, Wen Niang only sat in a daze every day. The villagers sympathized with her, but they also lost family members since many villagers died and disappeared after that night. With our current conditions, I don't think Wen Niang's natal family will accept her and her son back. It will be difficult for her to survive alone with her child."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
How is he a loving father if he was about to marry his daughter to that pervert for some money?
As a father, Duan Sida can be said to be a loving father since he is willing to sacrifice himself for his daughter. But in Duan Yixin's eyes, Duan Sida was an enemy she must eliminate. But now, after the Yamen Guard caught him, he did not pose a danger to her for the time being.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
Being too chilled in this world is not gonna help her. It might not be as dangerous as her previous world but people who are scheming and sneak attack are more dangerous than those who attack openly. Wonder if she will ever leave this village and I wonder who the ML is?
Not knowing what happened at Duan Sida's house, Duan Yixin was busy cleaning and processing medicinal herbs.ÂdetailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
I do not understand. Why hack the door instead of opening it and how did the villagers saw it if it was the back door?
The villagers were horrified when they saw her frantically hacking at the door from the hole with a kitchen knife. Zhao Xiaohua saw this, turned to look at Duan Xiyan, and said in a low voice, "Go! Leave now!"detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
These people have no conscience. Like you tried to get her killed by selling her off to a pervert and when the tables turned, your behaving as if she was the one at fault. Like why should she die coz you guys can't keep your greed in check?
Duan Xiyan's eyes flashed when she heard her mother's words. She clenched the jade pendant tightly and thought to herself, 'I wonder who my paternal aunt's husband is. This jade pendant must be very valuable, and ordinary villagers can't afford it. And now, I am the owner of this jade pendant instead of that bitch Duan Yixin.'detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof161dCommented
How shameless. It was a gift left by Duan Yixin to her daughter and she just shamelessly stole it and is now giving to her daughter for pawning off ??
Knowing that this might be the last time they could see each other, Zhao Xiaohua said, "This jade pendant was left for Duan Yixin by Duan Mengling. She said it was a love token given to her by her late husband. After your paternal aunt died, Mother stole this jade pendant before your grandfather found out about it. Now, the only ones who know about this jade pendant are only you and me."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof162dReplied to Andagam
Yeah. But it is more interesting to see someone overcome the adversity and make it
One of them was a man in his fifties who looked like the leader of this group of scientists. He handed a metal briefcase to a young woman in her early twenties and said, "Little Duan, someone must have betrayed us. Take this liquid chip and leave immediately. I have asked Captain Yu to escort you out safely."detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof162dCommented
I am a little confuses about how the warehouse worked. If she is mentally in warehouse, what happens to her physical body?
While eating a simple meal, Duan Yixin's mind was busy inside the warehouse. Whenever she has free time, she will use the time to open boxes in the warehouse and arrange the items neatly. It's also easier for her to get supplies in case of an emergency.detailTransmigrated To Another World: General, I'm Not Your White MoonlightFantasy ¡ ColorfulAutumnWind - Dreamingof165dReplied to lackadaisical99
Actually what he meant was not her saving the lives, but her running around outside, doing farming, freely speaking to men and not adhering to any social norms of ancient time (no women of aristocratic family would do it). Ruo has modern mentality but her brother doesn't so in his views,he is right. And actually adjusting with her not so lady like behaviour shows that he is actually trying to be more understanding towards Ruo.
Wei Yichen explained, "Your eldest sister lived separately from us for the past thirteen years, experiencing her own hardships. We should be more patient and forgiving. Admittedly, her past behaviors are indeed inappropriate viewed from our present perspective. However, we can't expect her to change drastically and immediately, it's a slow process. Thus, perhaps no one is in the wrong, but rather it signifies that thirteen years is just too long a break."