Hurricanezike
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I’m enjoying the story so far, but I think the story would be more immersive if more terms from Ancient China were used. Also, it would help if the Emperor became more fleshed out as the story progresses, and if a proper reason was given for Why the general likes the Emeror. However, these are just suggestions, continue your story how you see fit, I’m just along for the ride.