Sean_Atkinson

Ames already turned him down for reproduction.

Correction: She was not aware it was Richard or a clone, just somebody who claimed to be able to bring him back.

Sam should not have opened the door. Otherwise, he would not have been able to enter.

I wonder if there is an explanation on how they managed to get the timeline extended to this point. It's what 1 to 1.5 years at this point.

It may have to do with the translation. Other novels I've read have a tendency to always mix up he/she, him/her.

It is Gryffindor as he was the one who cursed Orrin.Didn't kill him but he got revenge

end repeated portion, even if some of it was reworded it was all the same discussion.

start repeated past of story.author I feel like you forgot this portion since this was originally why he was going to the capital, then you changed it to the university aspect.

This was a pointless paragraph. the % explored could have been added to the previous paragraph

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