Tyrannicalsaber

it is a nice Story with quite the Potential and i would Love to read more of IT but the chapters are Sometimes Impossible to figure Out because there are jumps in it or IT presents an impromptu Situation that wasnt mentioned before. its Like you read e.g. my grandma bakes a cake and xyz Fights for world Domination with example skills.. but with all that Said i would recommend it as a novel with potential

The chapters are like jumping through the story. The bridges between chapters are nonexistent. But the story itself is great

Garo

I like this novel a lot and the plot is nice, I hope for more.. But it's disappointing that the chapters are so short... I hope after your stressful period full of tests and calculus worksheets the will be longer

Well it was quite fun to read but the inconsistencies of the story were quite hard to keep up with I also had the feeling that sometimes names were mixed up or there were some lines missing. But in the end it's a good casual read if the inconsistencies are fixed

Please edit he and she, its distracting And please pay attention to the names because Wang Chao was named shen xiu after integrating with his wolfdoh

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Well it kinda slipped me that they had a 3some... And u started graphic so just do what u think is right...

My condolences