The three chapters you've already done are absolutely great. I loved how you made the main charecter Tanya tape into an unknown power that surpassed and terrified BEING X it was spactacular. I loved everything about this story you have made. I liked that Tanya is the Commander if this Secret Organization that specializes in like black ops and intelegence and counterintelligence. Its Awesome also I like how you incorperated the assassination attempt on the emperor it was a interesting idea in my opinion.

please dont worry you good. 👍

I'll think the way Drago hides his true power and ability is cool but I love how he uses his brains to out smart people all the while growning stronger

This in my humble opinion, IS A WORK OF ART!!!!!! I love how well you use your worlds to paint an awesome and all inspiering picture of Tanya's might and cheer power. That power which she has enough to not only scare but absolutely terrifie the entities called Being X. I love it. 🎉👍👍👍Awesome Job lol 👍👍👍🎉