WeebGodSama

The edited chapters are better. There aren't any typos or grammatical errors like before editing it. Good work author

exp

i like the dad

I like how the mc has connections but theyre not too op neither is he too helpless. This is the kinda background I like mcs to have

nice

Waiting for the next chapter.

The dad is pretty op nice.

exp

Thanks, this helps a lot.

I read this and till now it's pretty good. I particularly like how there are multiple cultivation types (dantian, body and mind) this is getting a spot in my reading list. good job.