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The story begins with wei hao neglected by the so-called god, then there are too many timeskips and too many speechless moments. at around 40 or so chapters in, it started to feel like its no longer a timeskip or speechless moment. After that things still doesn't progress much IMO, but if you're patient enough, you'll be rewarded pretty nicely! When you reach 100+ chapters(around the start of the time recovery, etc.) things kinda start to develop. Starting from chapter 300+(interstellar arc) it started getting pretty exiciting. although there are some chapters that's inferior, but overall its great. As for the ending, it's very unexpected. but also somehow unsatisfying and satisfying at the same time. Overall its nice and left a nice impression. You should give it a try.
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The translation quality is really good just need more proofreadings. The story is developed pretty well too, IMO its great. For the story ending though, it's seems kinda rushed and TBH pretty boring. The ending is really short, i thought that it'd be done when at least most of our questions are answered, but no, it did not. So in short: I liked the story, but i kinda resent the ending.
First, thanks for noodletown for the translation! I thought that the chapter was going to be longer, alas i'm disappointed. The ending is kinda half baked for me. Anyways, overall the story is pretty good and the character development is great too. So i think that its great overall except the ending.