Joe_Brooks

With a lot of these web novels it should be understood that the English language is definitely not their first language. Spelling and some grammatical errors can be fixed with a good proof reader or editor. That said this is a pretty darn good story so far. Unique way of writing, pretty solid and good story telling gets you hooked with the most focus on the MC and small flashes of insight into the minor characters. It really helps build the world they're in. I'd definitely give it 2 thumbs up 👍 👍 . Keep up the good work Author.

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