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Is it a trap? the world may never know.
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Could have been a decent story ruined by too much exposition. I find myself often skimming Through them. Not every detail and thought process should be spell out, it disrupts the story's flow. Context, subtext, and clues works fine if not better even! Readers need not be spoon-fed. Instead let them solve puzzles. let them work for their meal. dont look down on them.
let me guess, your favorite word is "slowly", quite distracting.
Absolutely ridiculous! Planting cucumbers that's strengthens cultivation, fine-- But planting a piece of paper with fighting skills and growing a plant from it that grants said skill? I know this is fiction but god damn, I can only suspend my disbelief so far. Also the continuous *** jokes isnt funny even if the author writes it 7 more times. This web novel has little going for it, so of you're reading this just STAY AWAY. You have been warned.