Osiris_Anubis
Just a guy who loves magic, fantasy, and who is always looking for a good gamer fics
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of course take the time you need your mental and physical health matters more (my opinion). and from a reader point of view authors write better when they feel well.
i like that the mc isnt just a boring hetero and appreciates the femboi booty XD. it kind sucks that this sight doesnt have more heteroflexible/lgbtqia+ MC's
no. or not as often as this. like maybe once every 5-10 chapters. or special ocasions like certain strong traners/gym leaders
... *SIGH*
she could have easily told harry she wanted him to go with her to filtwick (cant spell the Charms Professors name} to make sure the broom was safe since it was sent without a sender.
Hermione's worship of authority and false belief that Dumbledore is a leader of a group of wizengamot that car for new bloods would make her feel indebted to him. she would be easily manipulated to be a bad person. she wouldn't be BAD per say but if i was harry i wouldn't forgive her for her ignorance. in my eyes she's what belletrix is to Voldemort but for Dumbledore/authority
sighhhhh i hate misty so much. im literally unable to read fics where she journeys with ash. i love your story so far and will rate it 5 across the board. i just cant continue reading.
×sigh× i hate miaty
way too much repeats of the same exact wording
Look at my review. If you like this “stolen novel” you can find the original on fanfiction . Net they have all the 46 chapters there
!!!STOLEN FAN - FIC!!! Its posted ORIGINALLY on fan fiction dot net under same title by Mrs. InsaneOne. All 46 Chapters. I don't see any credit to ORIGINAL author. and this author is Accepting patron for more chapters of STOLEN WORK!
author is probably truing to use a larger vocabulary so the story feel more expanded rather than too childish with repeated adjectives and small vocab. they could have said without trouble but ^shrug^ authors choice
did the MC release the grunts pokemon or kill them?
it literally says in the past chapter that she looks his age in the twenties
i wonder if anyting special would happen if he used the upgrade body while in the water pool the tooth made.
i know this was written a while ago, but it would be cool to teach his pokemon english so he could give commands that other trainers wouldnt understand.
i gett its apart of certain cultures to marry into good background families and for the potential partner to be educationally smart and rich but god does it sound very gold diggerish
she had one when drinking the undiluted divine milk
i thought i was charisma but then there wouldnt be a point to Charm
at least he wasnt fired for a stupid reason like in other novels