World background a little lacking in details. character design ok. story development ok. writing quality excellent. hoping this story comes out of trial read.

.... ward door and walked "in" ..... stepped "in" ....

ten times faster not slower

would be nice to make this an arc of the story like "Return to Zenith Arc" then do a proper chapter title. it's not good to look at "Return to Zenith I, II, V, VI... "

good story needs to get out of trial read and start release

chapter 18 already and the grammar is like machine translation. the ideas and all jumbled, missing words, inconsistent terms and names. The story would be awesome if not for the above. please find an editor to streamline the story and bring out the gem.

should his gold be 989 since he paid 11 gold at the tavern...

is this story gasping for breath? looks like it's dying. I will be disappointed since it's a good story.

very good story overall. should be a 5 star if not from it being in the trial program. Everyone pls support it to get it out of trial and into regular updates.

the suspense is unbearable!!!! 😵😵🤤

it's kinda weird and illogical that he desperately needs an attack spell but opted for a movement spell when he has enough gold points. There is no explanation in his viewpoint why he went with a movement spell.