I'm not the best at writing since this is only the 2nd serious thing I've written but thanks for reading and i hope you like it [img=recommend]

i didnt think it would need one.

I am unsure if i will add romance later.

Thank you for letting me know. I can go back to framing the names. I just thought it broke the flow of writing.

Hello Im here for the mandatory author review. This is my first time writing anything other than a school paper so if you have any tips or anything please do leave a comment. I hope you all enjoy it! [img=recommend]

so far its been very good, i hope it continues

This chapter is very similar to a chapter of supreme magus. Like even the name of the main character and the name of the world were copied for a couple sentences.

I like the story, its very interesting and pretty fun but the world building is pretty nonexistent. They start talking about the classes of different creatures but its not explained properly. I couldnt tell if an iron class was worse than bronze or if a magister was which class.

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the synopsis made me so excited for this book, I really hope it's as good as it sounds! Now all I need is chapters to read so I can really enjoy it

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