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nomadiclove_family2yrCommentedCh 26 Cera & Jericho: The Dark Chimera- nomadiclove_family3yrPosted
Very well written story! I feel like I know each character and their personalities. The adventure and action is non stop and the humor is light-hearted and fun. I absolutely recommend this book! Can't wait to buy the book and see the artwork. For anyone who doesn't already know, the artists associated with this book are phenomenal!!
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Ch 15 Message From Chrono - nomadiclove_family3yrCommentedCh 1 Awakening (ch 1)
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I started by reading the first book by this author. It was good. Now, with the second and third books in progress, I'm amazed. I look forward to updated chapters. I'm engrossed with characters and the story line. The writing style is better than before and I keep hoping the saga will continue with more books.
- nomadiclove_family3yrCommentedCh 20 Goliath vs The Dark Chimera
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frightened
Cera is frighten to the point that she began to speak in whispers as if her voice was stolen from her. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
caught
A crushing force pushed his opponents to the ground as if the gravity of a black hole was suddenly placed on top of them. Their breaths cought short as they were gasping against the pressure. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
Thank you!!!! I love the books! I can definitely see the improvements too! I hope my edits don't come off as rude. I figure most are just helpful grammatical things to help you come publishing time. Keep writing! You're awesome!!
This chapter has been deleted. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommentedCh 13 Becoming Hunters & Magic Control
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ruins. There's
"It's located in the ruins, there's an old temple north of the kingdom of flames." - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
gateway
"Where is the gateways?" - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
And so with that,
Sadako chimed in. Evan and Sadako might have made up but she was the type of person that wouldn't forget what's important to her not even for a second. And so with that the group of four consisting of Cera, Evan, Sadako and Avery headed out to the wasteland. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
important to her, not even for a second.
Sadako chimed in. Evan and Sadako might have made up but she was the type of person that wouldn't forget what's important to her not even for a second. And so with that the group of four consisting of Cera, Evan, Sadako and Avery headed out to the wasteland. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
shew
Lyran was trying to shoe Cera away while Angel started snickering. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
Angel, Cera
As soon as Lyran introduced Angel Cera began teasing her while laughing maniacally. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
Kingdom of Flames less stressed and more relaxed
Inside Selina was pretty similar to the kingdom of flames, though it was drastically different at the same time. Selina might as well have been another country. Everyone generally looked different they had a different air about them, almost like they were less stressed out more relaxed. - nomadiclove_family3yrCommented
(they had to stay on gaurd 24/7 during that time, but they were welled skilled at being cautious after their time on Neodeka.)........a suggestion??
They had been traveling for nearly a month through the treacherous wasteland, battling monsters along the way. They had to stay on guard 24/7 in that time, though after their time on Neodeka this was something they were perfectly used to anyways.