This shouldn't work unless amari is screwing with them. The AI he gave Lane was basically red queen and something he could master control at any time.

So adaption. Will learn, grow, and counteract when needed to limit weakness

Him having both destruction and absorb would probably make him up there with the strongest beings in DC under the right circumstances.

Valeria is the only person who can summon doom and ask him to do something, and he will. Also named her, so has a way bigger impact on Valeria.

I also can't justify how he fated to kill ares based on the future he got told to him. He is so weak compared to ares. Especially when hermes and herakles are ants compared to ares.

The amount of asspulls this chapter is astounding. It's bloody deimos. Also, don't help that all the gods are doing nothing and letting herakles and hermes be used like pawns by pathetic deimos

Time to become immortal. I'm sure he has something in his back pocket, whether it's klarion or something to do with his powers evolving to siphon the of Vandal his immortality he got from the unique energy of the meteor.

Time to become immortal. I'm sure he has something in his back pocket, whether it's klarion or something to do with his powers evolving to siphon the of Vandal his immortality he got from the unique energy of the meteor.

Good chapter. Hopefully, the blood thing was bluff or the unique properties of his blood with extremis have a safety feature where it destroys itself on a cellular level if outside the body. maybe it burns itself or something. Don't need no blood shenanigans. Alwasy energy wrote well, and clones are always a cop out also.

I love your stories, but Jesus christ are the chapters unneedingly short for no reason, barely progress the situation whatsoever and take forever for another chapter to come out. It's tiresome.

That's perfectly fine, and the explanation is sound. Christ, if you make him closer to the comic one down the line with him, maybe building an immunity to mind control, the more it's used on him, then that's a good explanation. Maybe even bring back the fact that the Hulk grows bigger the angrier he gets. MCU removing that since cgi, I guess, along with other thing

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Hulk being controlled should literally be removed from this tbh. The MCU, really adding that to the Hulk, was dumb and made no sense. Should have just kept Hulk closer to his comic counterpart. He is literally too angry to be controlled by someone like enchantress. At least when it was done in the midnight sons gane there was an explanation behind.

Good chapter, though either way writing and phrasing wise.

It's just a crane. That cliffhanger is highly unneeded, not gonna lie. Mr. Negative is out here taking these L's living up to his negative namesake.

It's an expression. It means the same they just add Jose to the end. There is probably a reason, but I don't know what it is.

Future foundation, it's been most of the time I believe

I love this story, but this chapter has barely moved forward. The last few chapters have barely moved the story forward and are way too short for how long it takes for another chapter to come out.

fantastic chapter.

There are way too many plot points in this story at this point. You gotta trim the fat before it gets too much. Zoom has to die no ifs or buts. Somehow, the whole chapter was spent on kara's decision when that could have easily been shortened to advance the story more. I'm sure they are ways to get to the point you're going without dragging it out as long as you did while still advancing the story.