Xirus_rulez

lol the reality of this passage hold true today. People do that already

the wooden bed...classic. Strong and sturdy great on the back.

All great comments and questions that I will definitely take into consideration. For obvious reasons I can not answer those questions, but thank you very much for the chapter comment, I really do appreciate the input. It helps me as a writer consider different points of view and what the reader is feeling as well.

Yes, I am the author, and yes I and reviewing my own novel. Do I feel bad...no, if didn't like my own story why would I write it? Hopefully, this will push others to give the novel review and check it out.

it can get boring I agree, but I also feel it is important make clear the side the MC starts on that way any changes that may happen or cause change in the MC are more noticeable. Speaking on the lines of good and evil question, "Is a dark elf evil because it uses dark magic?"

Absolutely agree

The secret will be uncovered

Wecome to Hogwarts....for preschoolers