Awesome. Interesting choice of a talent though. I would have chosen ninjutsu and Water Style Finger Pistol to go with it. X-ray vision plus an analogue of a firearm is ought to be a power of its own especially if you have smoke grandes or Hidden Mist jutsu=)

I did waste half an hour and no results so far. Would really appreciate if you were to give a link

Soo... will Sasuke get a chidori from Kakashi during Orochimaru appearance before 3rd stage of exam or he will get a new signature jutsu?

unreasonable arrangement. Both sharingan and jinchuuriki should be under a jounin with sharingan.

nah. if hiruzen is alive that means orochi;s hands and jutsu are functional

Nah... Naruto is a lousy father and husband. Hinata deserves better

why? whats the point? MC just created a whole lot of problems for himself

So far the premise is interesting

Trash talk is kinda goofy if you have ever met real violence. Well for ideas: 1)Unbreakable charm can make invulnerable armor plates. 2)Spongify charm can make amortisation to absorb kinetic energy 3)Space magic can make space between layers of clothes into a literal maze + one can stuff even more armor plates or amortisation layers in there without weight affecting wearer 4) one can place whole artillery battery into a a magically stretched place like in a Scamander's suitcase 5) selfguided projectiles (learn from Dobby The Assasin) 6)Turning piece of debree into gas and cancelling magic with Finita Incantatem can effectivly act as poison (gas molecules turn back into pieces of wood right inside your blood vessels) 7)One can become Antman with reducio and engorgio charms 8)etc. etc... Sky is the limit with the way Rowling portrays magic 9)there are magical artefacts that can perceive ill intent for gods sake!

10th chapter. So far so good. I cannot understand the typical american trash talk of the hero and his problems with combat as in my opinion he would have wiped the floor with any foe had he been prepared. In my opinion almost any HP spells can be weaponised from Lumos up to Space Extension. I understand that smoking pieces of corpses are not in line with the DC and HP narrative but fights in both of these universes are goofy as hell. One can make lasers with lumos, shoot from a gun with an artillery shells (kudos to space magic), summon drone army, conjure poison gases, make unbreakable armor, heal any nonmagical injury, charm slugs to aim by themselves... Well, i hope fights will be better in the future

I am gonna become Sanada's waifu, shannaro!

I hope the relationship would be with Shizune in the end - a very rarely included love interest. For characters it can be Gambit from Marvel or any Mugiwara teammate, or Kenshin or Baki. Maybe just maybe making some chakra guns or simply using water pistol jutsu/ Possibilities are endless.

if its not an organic part of the plot pls dont do it. (By the way Gambit from Marvel has cool ability - might use it as a card)

Donquixote Doflamingo to master chakra strings. Seriously they can be used everywhere. You can make your own original techniques like chakra wheels for speed, whips, wire mines from Dishonored (monofilament wires cutting everyone and such). If Sasori and Kankuro can use them to hold and move puppets why not try to use them as teleqinesis or strengthenings like exoskeleton. Dont forget the infamous butler from Hellsing.

yes or Shizune (Tsunade's apprentice - my favourite female from the series)

Whats the point in this uniform? Its not an armor! Secrecy? Rule of Cool? Pretty sure people will be asking questions and any sensor of chakra or inuzuka or hyuga or aburame wil be able to identify him if they pay attention and presumably they will. Little bit childish i think + mask as it is will decrease field of vision and that is deadly in this past paced ninja world (i might only assume that ANBU masks are fitted perfectly to the personnel). Armor without helmet is somehow OK yet helmet without armor is asking for trouble.

Making his own team at best. 1)Avengers will lay under the goverment and its funny because the reason why people become superheroes is the fact that the goverment doesnt care about people 2)Wakanda is a bunch of barbarians with a high tech weapons. Massive country with all the resourses concentrated on a royal family. There is only one Panther and everybody else is running around with ultrasophisticated overimproved versions of shields and spears thinking that somehow spears and rhinos are better than firearms and heavy armored transport. Having energy fields incorporated into cloaks doesnt compensate for the basic design flaws. And they are desiding on their leader by a trial of combat for gods sake! They have got tribes and shi... council with representatives. They are unreliable. 3) Inhumans - caste system and all that jazz. Unreliable bunch of weirdos with a scewed psyche and physiology. 4)X-man... maybe as mercenary force after talking about Greater good with Albus Dumb.. Ehhmm.. Xavier. Sell them the idea that fighting for world peace is a good commercial to the public eye. 5)As he is a Batman/Luthor/Holmes - much better to train his own troops instead of a happy rag-tag gaggle of people that have never worked together and have different interests. Army is not a council - it takes a solid structure and all the heroes in Marvel are teenage kids in mind and behaviour. Just because they can tank a missle, fly at supersonic speeds and throw plama bolts doesnt mean that they can get the shit done. P.S. Please dont let his secret identity leak because *wink, wink* Civil War and goverment and powerstruggle. Being anonimous fighter is better i believe. He is a Batman for Christs sake!

i kind of wanted for hero not to become OP in terms of raw strength. Really was hoping for MC to really put the memory part of Batman Luther and Holmes to use but this chapter indicates more of a standard "grab powers, use these powers to grab more power then bruteforce everything till win at life. I hope i am wrong on that part.

Oakland huh... "Lovely" place for a child to grow in=) https://spotcrime.com/ca/oakland

MC is a kind of retard. If you run you run - instead he starts a flashy fight with bloodthirsty screams of a standard villain. And how the hell nobody questions his ability to speak with him being stuck in a cell alone for his whole life?