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10th chapter. So far so good. I cannot understand the typical american trash talk of the hero and his problems with combat as in my opinion he would have wiped the floor with any foe had he been prepared. In my opinion almost any HP spells can be weaponised from Lumos up to Space Extension. I understand that smoking pieces of corpses are not in line with the DC and HP narrative but fights in both of these universes are goofy as hell. One can make lasers with lumos, shoot from a gun with an artillery shells (kudos to space magic), summon drone army, conjure poison gases, make unbreakable armor, heal any nonmagical injury, charm slugs to aim by themselves... Well, i hope fights will be better in the future
The squib who became Iron Lad... In DC
Cathbel
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Trash talk is kinda goofy if you have ever met real violence. Well for ideas: 1)Unbreakable charm can make invulnerable armor plates. 2)Spongify charm can make amortisation to absorb kinetic energy 3)Space magic can make space between layers of clothes into a literal maze + one can stuff even more armor plates or amortisation layers in there without weight affecting wearer 4) one can place whole artillery battery into a a magically stretched place like in a Scamander's suitcase 5) selfguided projectiles (learn from Dobby The Assasin) 6)Turning piece of debree into gas and cancelling magic with Finita Incantatem can effectivly act as poison (gas molecules turn back into pieces of wood right inside your blood vessels) 7)One can become Antman with reducio and engorgio charms 8)etc. etc... Sky is the limit with the way Rowling portrays magic 9)there are magical artefacts that can perceive ill intent for gods sake!
Cathbel:Thanks for the review, man or woman ! As for what you said about fighting… First I have to say that I’m not very good at writing those. I’m working on it though. As for your spell ideas : awesome ! I didn’t think of using the lumos like this. However you have to understand that Ned is a pioneer in this particular field of magic. He has to start from scratch or almost, only aided by his intellect, Mel and his drive. He has to re-work every spell, enchantment, (etc…) to work with his system. So he can’t be overpowered right off the bat… At least, that’s how I’m trying to show it. Oh ! And, I’m French so… American trash talk ?image
Thanks for the review, man or woman ! As for what you said about fighting… First I have to say that I’m not very good at writing those. I’m working on it though. As for your spell ideas : awesome ! I didn’t think of using the lumos like this. However you have to understand that Ned is a pioneer in this particular field of magic. He has to start from scratch or almost, only aided by his intellect, Mel and his drive. He has to re-work every spell, enchantment, (etc…) to work with his system. So he can’t be overpowered right off the bat… At least, that’s how I’m trying to show it. Oh ! And, I’m French so… American trash talk ?