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I like Chicken Nuggets. Pay me in chicken nuggets, I will read your book in one sitting.
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crazy_turkey182 months agoCommentedwelcome back! just happy it wasn't abandonned
- crazy_turkey183 months agoCommented
I agree, at this rate she definitely need therapy and some heart medicines from all these jump scares. Maybe throw in a lover just so she has someone to rant too.
- crazy_turkey183 months agoCommented
*lair
- crazy_turkey184 months agoCommented
this feels like a calm before a storm
- crazy_turkey185 months agoCommented
oh i like this chapter. the death jackals being pretty talkative is interesting and there's some sort of introduction to who is with them. cool
- crazy_turkey185 months agoCommented
ho ho, digging her way to her doom i see. can't wait for that bloodshed
- crazy_turkey185 months agoCommented
Honestly, I think as a reader, I could probably feel the dwindling down. But nonetheless, a story that i still follow rather closely. It's good, and it has potential in it. I hope for a conclusion with the story, nothing rushed, a good end. You she come so far, and the change in pace that you needed is a good move. I think as an author you have been doing well. (: Keep it up!
- crazy_turkey185 months agoCommented
yes author you better run. that last line.....
- crazy_turkey186 months agoCommented
*Fist pump in the air* scoreeeeeee