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Mc with good brains.. similar to tobirama's character..
It's going good so far .. and according to the story development won't it be too late for recruiting Nami or is she not in the plan.. she would be probably dead by now đ¤
Continue the story.. better complete it first.. good or bad it will at least give you enough experience
It was already good however if the character can align towards a bit chaotic neutral then it would have been much better..
Thanks man and keep up the good work đ
Get well soon man
Just write how you have planned out.. and about the location just create a dimension when only people with x gene can have access to it somewhere on earth from where they can come in and out of it..
What happened to his girlfriend?? and to be honest the wishes could have been better..
I think having too much girls in a harem is not too good.. friendzone her instead
One piece, Naruto, bleach, I reincarnated as a slime
Both but no nor please
It's upto u though I am only giving u a suggestion..u don't have to take it
Just try changing the character of the protagonist as the story progresses then.. make it a bit caring at least towards their subordinate and loved ones
Yasaka