Nice job! Look forward to reading more!!

How does he not know how to swim? Thats kind of pathetic.

Why is he forced to go to the camp?Its not a prison that was never a rule. He can just leave whenever he wants.

Kind of annoying how he keeps trying to fight aang who wants nothig to do with him. Does the mc have nothing better to do than spar with random characters.

Just kill him already. At this point its just annoying how he bends over for everyone.

He told them how advanced he was at the flute. Why is he suspicious of them for knowing that.