good cliffhanger

it's nice to see that not all patients can be saved.

I have to disagree. All romance is hard to write, so there is a very low success rate for any of them. Harems are just not more successful than a 1-1 romance. That said harems are more likely to include more romance stereotypes that are plot killers. For me that is yandere.

Hiring employees should have been after the conveyer construction.

DART system map taken from Wikipedia.

Badly drawn depiction of the renovated house in Dallas.

Horrible depiction of the changes to the Panther house in the original timeline.

Here's the renovated house for my grandmother Eva. Keep in mind that i failed art.

Here's a badly drawn version of the pre-renovation house for my grandmother Eva.

Panther house layout

Panther house's new layout.

The rough draft of the new Panther house image again.

This is a rough sketch of what i would plan for a more livable house.

This was the original rough layout of our double wide trailer/master bedroom addition.

Here's a rough layout of our house in Kansas. The proportions are off, and that throws the stairs off a bit, but the general idea is there. i'm adding this to all of the chapters that reference this house.

Here's a rough layout of our house in Kansas. The proportions are off, and that throws the stairs off a bit, but the general idea is there. i'm adding this to all of the chapters that reference this house.

Here's a rough layout of our house in Kansas. The proportions are off, and that throws the stairs off a bit, but the general idea is there. i'm adding this to all of the chapters that reference this house.

Here's a rough layout of our house in Kansas. The proportions are off, and that throws the stairs off a bit, but the general idea is there. i'm adding this to all of the chapters that reference this house.

i had some luck with my previous saves being in my save history. The random word delete is definitely frustrating.

i won't be as shameless as other authors about their story. My update stability is highly lacking. i consider this story to both be practice, and establishment of formats and styles for the next 2 stories that i have planned. Using real people as the basis for the characters has been a crutch, but it also limits a lot of personal details. Most of my writing is counter- Hollywood/Barbie culture. i try to separate the specific topics into different chapters in case my topics don't interest you. As of now i typically try to write between 1500-2000 per chapter, but the chapter lengths can change due to edits or if i find out that there is better length for the consumers when i start the fictional parts of the story. i do need much more criticism to improve anything that is agreed to be a flaw instead of conscious choice against mainstream point of views.