Well... We will have to see, also, nice pic.

I was thinking of rewriting my earlier chapters, the same content only the change in writing. What do you guys think?

Thank you.

Thanks for the kind comments. Hope you have a good day.

Yea, it should be exploding from inside out. Thanks man[img=recommend]

I will try, depending on how this work performs currently. If the reception is at least, average. I will upload and will try not to get sidetracked, by other stuff.[img=recommend]

So none of the examiners noticed the mc ignoring a person literally falling to his death. None of them cared that an attack that was seriously not needed ended up destroying half the area and injuring several participants while some literally fainted because of the overwhelming heat. And he is a hero with 14 rescue points! Yep, either they are smoking weed or I am reading wrong.

Wtf, Isn't this exactly the opposite of what the examiners are looking for. Are you trying to be a hero or just someone who wants to look cool in front of other people?

Really good and consistent writing. Enjoying it and learning from it. Keep up the great work. ....................................................................

This look has a simple name: BAdass...

Yes, indeed, the trademark must be implemented.

Your writing is very clear and engaging. I definitely took some pointers. Keep up the great work..............................................................

Just call it the Devil fruit: Ton Ton no mi instead of the Akuma no mi: Ton Ton no mi. Its much cleaner and less confusing.

Let's say it together... Bruh....

Thanks, a good start but just needs a little bit of editing.

LOL... Where do you get these GIFs??

Give it a few more tries who knows maybe you will like it but even if you don't. No problem! Thank you for Reading.

Almost all of the girls you can think of when thinking about one piece. I have chosen the timeline carefully so that I can have almost all of them. As for the plot, my main motto will be the harem and the plot will be secondary. Of course, It doesn't mean i haven't thought out the plot of the story. I already have the plot ready for the mc, at least the final arc. I guess i will go with the flow for now and introduce the main storyline and antagonists slowly over time so that the effect they have on the world remains minimum for now. Also so that, the mc can create his harem in peace for now because he is not ready for them both physically and mentally. I will explain in the next chap... and Thank you for Reading.

Oh, It's just a rough estimate, and more precisely it just a way for me to reference/remind the audience/readers that his mental state is not that of a 5-year-old anymore. Cheers...

Ah ****, forgot to put the commas. thanks...