That_Dude15467

One of your best chapters

How does this version of Dumbeldore fit with him letting himself die in HBP?

#2 Danmachi cause im a RR Fan

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Predicting he eventually works for AFO?

Amazing so far

why is it that even though he chose the low key path certain choices have better rewards for showing off

use contractions like you're in dialogue it makes it feel less awkward

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