Thank you for the chapters.

Dude, I am just going to say the same thing: there’s a bit more nuance to it. Black people in the equator (like dude, just grow some and say black people) simply do not and have not had an over abundance of food to the point where they don’t need to think or work. Where did you get this from? How could you realistically think this when there are literally tribes hunting for food at this very moment? Why do you think they don’t need to build things? Is planting crops easy? like is getting crops that survive in those harsh conditions while giving enough food while fighting off plant and human diseases which are more frequent than “in colder regions” all while working tirelessly in 30+ degree weather easy to you and requires no work or thinking. This isn’t even taking in other factors like desertification, wars or being occupated by these people who come from “cold” regions. Where did you get the information that black people are more primitive because they are more likely to have a big brow ridge?, there’s multiple questions in this so I’ll split it up, Where did you find the info that black people are more likely to have one? And where did you get the info that a large brow is correlated to low intelligence? And how does this effect the nords or others who have more defined features such as a large brow? Basically you don’t know what you’re talking about like me (I can’t even say plant diseases are more common near the equator, I can say human cause malaria, Ebola and others), but atleast I don’t go around saying ‘black people have it easy which is why other races who have worked hard are mentally superior’.

Now I know the saying: if you don’t have anything good to say then don’t say it and I also know I won’t be part of the majority here but… I don’t think this chapter was good. Like what did the first half of this have to do with anything, like what does a kid insincerely trying to use racism as a get out of jail free card have to do with this book. Like I get the point of building bad emotions but could this not be somehow linked to the book, like using any one of the terrible things that happen in the marvel universe. I would also think lengthening an event more would serve your purpose better like the orangutan being used as a s*x object is bad and shouldn’t happen but I just couldn’t get into it because it really doesn’t matter to the story and only has like 10 lines detailing it, like all I could think of while reading was “why should I care?”. I think this would work better if there was a semi long plotline which was semi descriptive that linked to marvel, this imo would be better both story wise and emotionally wise. Like have a POV of marvel character and then cause something bad happen to them which isn’t super generic and then switch back to the mc, this could also be used later on in the story to set up another plot point, idk just seems more streamlined and relevant. As for the second half, I will blame myself for not liking it, just couldn’t get into the whole William Fisk revenge thing. I liked the usage of the monster sociopath guy (bad at names) and stuff just couldn’t get into the story. I honestly just thought the revenge was boring and generic. I personally (just saying my opinion cause I can) would like it if mc started like torturing Fisk then realised it was meaningless and then just killed him along with the whole moral dilemma thing, then idk shed a tear, thought of his parents then told sociopath guy to kill the wife. Just my opinion at the point of writing this and maybe this would also be generic and boring if I read it. Hopefully if you have read this far you can realise I don’t just hate the book and author. Like I have read 60 chapters I care about it atleast a bit. I don’t hate this chapter I just think it isn’t good.

Thank you for the chapters.

Thank you for the chapters.

True.

Yes but over-generalisation has happened quite a lot so far. And In places just changing the wording would make it better, atleast a bit. E.g. most women picked A and most men picked B, or ‘I think big companies are causing some of the feminist outrage to suite their agenda’. This small change in wording decreases the scale of the generalisation.

Ok, so like, I agree having different identities brings their own benefits and disadvantages. And while the previous paragraph/sentence is contrived whatever, who cares. I find a problem with this thinking. By saying this you are saying that even though 74% of suic*des are males and 91% of r*pe victims are females, these statistics don’t matter because all of these cases are just because of individuals and not because of a mix of systemic problems and individual’s activities which lead to these statistics to be skewed in whatever direction. You are putting all the blame on individuals when there is very clearly a problem outside of that. Like 91%, is this not an issue? It Is not about ‘privilege’ it is about how disproportionatly disadvantaged a group of people are. 10 times more likely to be r*ped, that is insane. That is just the far end of the spectrum, I don’t even want to look for statistics on s*xual harassment. Of course everything above could be said about su*cide in men or a multitude of other issues. I just don’t think the ‘get over it, you get benefits from being ___’ mentality is correct for this situation. I don’t know how this is coming across but I don’t mean to be aggressive or anything of the kind. I don’t know if what I am talking about had the view I painted it with, I just like felt saying what I think. Anyway thank you for the chapters, I like them quite a lot, please keep updating if you want to.

Thank you for the chapters. I personally prefer the long chapters.

I don’t know how I didn’t see this, I probably just went tldr (too long didn’t read). Anyway, you literally just stripped almost all the negatives racist people have and said as long as all this doesn’t exist they are fine. Like sure, I agree but really? Basically I agree but I am questioning if this can happen In real life. Can all racists be reasonable racists for all their lives never once acting on their beliefs? I personally don’t think so. Tldr: I mostly agree with some opposition and a bit of nitpicking.

It isn’t necessary and maybe the sentence does sound stupid the way you are reading it. But it is also unnecessary for the person to even write the fanfic. The person is atleast trying to add more depth to the book than 90% of the rest on this site by describing stuff even though their English isn’t the greatest. Take them describing the desert, they didn’t just go ‘in a desert’ they tried to describe it beyond. It is like that, I presume. Ps. As a guy said before me focusing on the single and first thing with black connotations makes you look racist.

Surprisingly I liked this.(At chapter 40) The main character actually has some characteristics to him, as characters should, unlike let’s say the third ‘I get 10,000 fold return from my disciples’ ripoff that I have been reading recently. The story background though is basically the same as the others: generic with small differences from the others. (So far atleast) No cringe worthy face slapping. Just, I like it. Give it a try.

Dude, North Africa isn’t a country, how can I get data in the first search result about it: that data was the first that poped up from roughly ‘marrage in Africa’. And tbh so what? That wasn’t my point (although I could have said it clearer), arbitrarily pointing out problems about marriage in a different country is simply weird and has little point. Once again: wow countries have problems about marriage what a big deal. See ya, not responding again.

Ok, your question has been answered: the reason why you see so many females in media having control in the house while you don’t see that is because of culture difference. To elaborate it is because you probably see a lot of media from America or other western countries which have a more liberal stance. And to go on to your talk of marriages not lasting long, looks like you also have what you might call problems: Marriages are becoming less common in South Africa. Could this mean that marriage is becoming a fading tradition? According to the Marriages and Divorce, 2020 report released by Statistics South Africa, the total number of people getting married has fallen steadily from 2011 to 2020. Besides the high decline in 2020 that may have resulted from the restrictions on gatherings in that year, the number of civil marriages have been consistently declining. Civil marriages fell by 22,5% between 2011 and 2019 and declined by a further 31,1% in 2020. Oh look countries have problems about marriage what a big deal.

Ok this is….. ugh 1: author insuting someone’s intelligence is a low blow and does nothing. 2:there is no point for the reviewer to write this because those that believe them won’t read it anyway. 3: it doesn’t matter if marvel and cultivation can’t mix in either execution or in theory because it is a fanfic. Reincarnation into marvel is a thing that can’t happen and no-one cares. And finally: as a person has already commented It’s not that deep.

Burnt bodies don’t smell good. Don’t ask me why I know.

Thank you for the chapter.

Thank you for the chapter.

Thank you for the chapters.

I like it quite a lot.