marvellous setting , character of mc is too good other character are good but need upgrading and dimension in their character more , also drop the novel story is going direction

totally yeah you should write

first 10 ch looks good after then it getting boring , main character remain same type there is not so development side character dont have much characterstics , throughtout reading chp you will not feel any attachment or excitment whatever event happening

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first of all main character is fantastic he knows what descision to take before making any action ,plus knowing what current strength and weakness he have to make use of them right time, for world not much explored in story yet there only little exploration in human world

storyline quite goods as well as world setting power level setting are not quite right kind of weird main question how the womens wins the main war main character is totally pathetic no deceiveness,, no boldness, no calm thinking ,he is just hot headed

one thing he is overpowered now someone can beat him so easily

interesting start main characters is not weak mind or afraid to accept who is , female characters have different personalites ,they are not damsel in distress that mc need to save everytime , they have their own goal and desires,they are not afraid say things. one things to like the most is strong female characters. plus one mc conqured them they didnot disappear in background or left behind in story , they still appear in their own story separately showing growth,struggles for world background it not much explored yet in novel so cant say much

they can still f**k all powerful witches like you

let see interesting

kind of not what happening there is comedy yet type of youcant understand there not so much fights here tension raising moment are not present in first 60 chap you read story is stricly pg 13 you must be a kid if you want read it be make sure if you are 13 like it saying ,character get boring too much unwanted comedy [img=faceslap]

what i like about it comic timing of main characters and side characters,main character is intelligent not like some fools who doesnot know what he facing if he do that,knows what his bottom line is , never shying of showing whom he really is ,cultivation level is fine defined , let say downside also comic writing is too much in this ,it become saturated after 1500 ch you will get bored their is not much development between partners of main character nor with mc also , world development is better at first later after 500 ch it doesnot explore much of part of world