marvellous setting , character of mc is too good other character are good but need upgrading and dimension in their character more , also drop the novel story is going direction
Kyle_Kingsmaker
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LIKEThanks for the review! It really means a lot! Also about the character growth, I intend to do it as the story will on, since in these earlier chapters I'm still introducing the characters and am going to do a few things before they can grow. About the novel thing, it might seem lime I forgot or it's a random thing, but don't worry, it will show its use and purpose very soon and I'm pretty sure you all might like since I haven't seen this kind of thing yet. Once again, thanks for the review and for reading!🍷
Kyle_Kingsmaker:Thanks for the review! It really means a lot! Also about the character growth, I intend to do it as the story will on, since in these earlier chapters I'm still introducing the characters and am going to do a few things before they can grow. About the novel thing, it might seem lime I forgot or it's a random thing, but don't worry, it will show its use and purpose very soon and I'm pretty sure you all might like since I haven't seen this kind of thing yet. Once again, thanks for the review and for reading!🍷