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I will be honest it seemed in the middle there that details had been overlooked abs left out I was happy to see them resolved and happy for the story telling. This was fantastic and enjoyed beginning to end. The main rough parts are grammar and phrasing. I can see what is meant and have learned to correct it in my head but not all readers may be as forgiving. I do think that the first book and this one would make for great animations. Lots of storyline and enjoy how it all works together .

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I think you came up with a great compromise. If anything Brantley should really make himself invisible to Bianca so she cannot she him hit he can around. Great last few chapters. Cheers!

Great job keeping the story going You definitely keep it interesting. Cheers !

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Fantastic chapter! Looking forward to you fleshing this out and watching Dawn grow. Cheers!

The overall story is fantastic The characters are enjoyable albeit not always consistent. The editing for grammar and English phrases leaves much to be desired. However, with some editing this could be an even better story. Thank you, Mishak, for sharing your imagination, passion and inspiration. Cheers