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Shortex_12

Shortex_12

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I enjoy anime and literature and i like reading . My favorite anime is Naruto and my favorite anime characters are: Sasuke uchiha,Itachi uchiha, Gilgamesh, Counter Guardian EMIYA, Madara uchiha.

2019-08-11 JoinedNigeria
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    Shortex_121mth
    Posted

    Starts off well, really looking forward to what comes next because it looks to have the potential to be a very good one

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    Reborn as the savior of Manchester United
    Sports · TheGreekMythosGuru
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    Shortex_122yr
    Replied to KhadaFourJhin

    or at night

    Neji paused for a brief second before continuing to comb his sister's hair. He gets experience points from doing this too. And since he is banned from going to the Park, aka not being able to enter the dungeon, any Exp is welcome.
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    The Cursed Gamer
    Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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    Shortex_122yr
    Commented

    both definitely have their advantages, a spear would be better when you were fighting a small amount of people but in a crowded battlefield a sword would be better

    Also, is Mathias right or not with regard to swords being just a common theme overused by people since immemorial for stories?
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    Saharan Successor
    Book&Literature · Vostarian
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    Shortex_122yr
    Replied to Kutu

    I'm also a Muslim, and don't feel offended by it if you noticed he said " they think they are the saviors of islam" that shows he is just talking about that group of people, not the entire religion and everyone who is part of it

    Riser looked at the man in front of him and gave him a warning. He already 'judges' this man lieutenant, and all of them have the same crazy-looking eyes as this man. They think they are the savior of Islam, but they are nothing more than a rapist, murderer, and terrorist.
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    How I Become a Flaming Turkey
    Anime & Comics · Fangrove
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    Shortex_122yr
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    I'm also a Muslim, and don't feel offended by it if you noticed he said " they think they are the saviors of islam" that shows he is just talking about that group of people, not the entire religion and everyone who is part of it

    Riser looked at the man in front of him and gave him a warning. He already 'judges' this man lieutenant, and all of them have the same crazy-looking eyes as this man. They think they are the savior of Islam, but they are nothing more than a rapist, murderer, and terrorist.
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    How I Become a Flaming Turkey
    Anime & Comics · Fangrove
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  • Shortex_12
    Shortex_122yr
    Commented

    Bruh....

    Chen Yuxing was a stranger to the current Chen Fan. Unlike his indecision about Wang Xiaoyun, he wouldn't bat an eyelash if Chen Yuxing died suddenly. In fact, he would use the opportunity to conquer An Youya who would be sad from Chen Yuxing's passing.
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    Adventure in the Xianxia Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Celestial_Demon
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    Shortex_122yr
    Replied to TrueImmortalDevil

    not really, in the show Gary was a good trainer, he was just annoying

    He went on to explain, but you cut him off, "I know all that, what idiot would challenge you to a gym battle without knowing what a gym battle is?" you asked, shaking your head, "What's your rules?"
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    Ascent (Pokemon Story)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • Shortex_12
    Shortex_122yr
    Posted

    A truly great story, I don't know how to even start describing it so you should definitely try it, I'm sure you'll love it, or at the very least enjoy it, keep up the good work author!

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    To Go Even Further Beyond (Dragon Ball Z)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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    Shortex_122yr
    Replied to TyrantPharaoh

    thanks for the clarification, and keep it up😁 I'm really enjoying your story

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    Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East
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  • Shortex_12
    Shortex_122yr
    Commented

    eid Mubarak 😁

    I wish to congratulate Happy Eid al-Fitr to all people.
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    Story: Fate/ Against Fight
    Anime & Comics · J_Titan
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    Shortex_122yr
    Replied to Shortex_12

    btw I'm just a few chapters in so I apologise in advance if I've said anything wrong

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    Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East
    TV · TyrantPharaoh
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    Shortex_122yr
    Posted

    it's a solid story, the main character has a nice background, and the story has good world building because the author uses the fact that his main character is a historian and develops around it. it does have some issues though, the first that comes to mind is the unrealistic politics, another is how the main character changes his mindset quickly, also the portrayals of can canon characters, and the bashing tone of the story, it's not there outright but you can tell. Another thing is that there is no solid reason given on why the mc does what he does, why he goes to such lengths. he also has a sort of god complex where he thinks he knows the characters, like in the chapter he's thinking of making Ned a wolf he has an internal monologue, and goes on a rant about how Ned is a foolish man who ruined house stark, and how Jon's line is better than Brandon's line, and it suddenly spirals into how he knows he can manipulate Bobby B. the final thing I have to say is about Torrhen stark, it seems that the protagonist truly doesn't understand why he knelt instead of fighting, the north had no more shifters at the time, and even if they did I doubt it would make that big of a difference, the fact is that as honourable as fighting sounds, they were up against dragons and Torrhen is a king so he has to protect his citizens, fighting against flying giant fire breathing lizards isnt exactly doing that, and also It was the correct thing to make his big brothers son his heir since it was rightfully his from the beginning. this is all I have to say, apart from the highlighted problems it's an okay story, great world building. I'm looking forward to more

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    Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East
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  • Shortex_12
    Shortex_122yr
    Commented

    I would totally do that hehehe

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    DxD Multiversal Gacha System
    Anime & Comics · Ashtin_Pratt
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  • Shortex_12
    Shortex_123yr
    Commented

    I feel so happy😢, first time I see an mc from my country, and better yet, named after the city I live in, you da best author👍🏽

    My knew name is Abuja Orunfemi, 14 years old, 6 foot, and apparently I'm African, Nigerian specifically, didn't even know that there was a Nigeria in God of Highschool, and apparently my tail is considered a deformity. I try to sort out the information in my head and come to the conclusion that the ROB did exactly as he said with out changing anything.
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    ALSSJ Saiyan in God of High School
    Anime & Comics · AfricanProdigy14
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    Shortex_123yr
    Commented

    This is disturbing

    Magnus looked at her confusedly, "Why? It is you who works every day and makes money. Which buys us food that you cook. But I haven't even seen the god so I can't waste my Thank you on him. I need proof if he wants my thank you."
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    Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]
    Book&Literature · MisterImmortal
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    Shortex_123yr
    Replied to BlakDregon

    but not all uchiha have their sharingans unlocked, unlike the hyuugas, and also the whole hyuuga taijitsu style is based around seeing the chakra points using the byakugan and blocking them, so long story short the hyuuga reply on the byakugan more than the uchiha rely on the sharingan

    "Hmm why would I choose them yeah sure the sharigan, mangekyo and, Rinnegan are great and all but I wanna Have something different from all that, there's a lot you can do with other kekkei Genkai's but unlike some Protagonist that dont think outside the box I very much do." I finished
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    Naruto: The journey of Rai Inazuma
    Anime & Comics · Arekuruu_Tento
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    Shortex_123yr
    Commented
    "I refuse." Kyle deadpanned.
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    My Unconventional Delivery System!
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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    Shortex_123yr
    Posted

    this is simply amazing 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 I hope that the author continues this, because this is one of the most amazing stories I've read and although it has a bit of a shaky start it quickly gets better.

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    Becoming A K-pop Idol
    Sci-fi · Maxime
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    Shortex_123yr
    Commented

    Did someone call?

    I'll have to shit gold to afford all of this I can tell just by looking at the sheer number of ingredients. I might as well not use oils unless needed.
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    God Pulled A Gacha and I Got Reincarnated
    Anime & Comics · TurkishJesus
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    Shortex_123yr
    Replied to Dracul91

    Time is relative as they say

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    The Epic of Leviathan
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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