Fresh feel and the characters are awesome! Attention to details is well maintained. I'm sure more exciting work is coming up. Keep up the good work Auth, good luck!!

It's amazing to see how the story's been narrated. The settings where the story happens are well defined. The Characters are well developed and used. Readers would offer their attention and get engaged if once tried. Looking forward for more exciting chapters!! sett

Niiice one for a pilot!

Author's way of developing the story was awesome. Characters are well designed with unique nature for individual characters. The fantasy land is described very well. Nice screenplay