The special power sounds interesting, but the mc is to stupid to make good use of it. He is unable to plan 5min ahead and can not use his power in a creative way. He can create weapons at a distance, has telekinesis, can se everything around him and can also use a hoverboard, but he still insist to just charge into melee with the enemy, preferebly large groups of them. Why not use hit and run, fast ambushes or ranged stealth kills? There is also the first girl he meets in the story that he instantly dreams of having as a wife and starts trying to show off for. They then have a tearful parting after knowing each other for an hour. After two monster hunts it is clear that he wishes to die in battle, he has no survival instinct or insight in his own power. He is a low level noob pulling aggro of a whole zone. I am amazed that he did not challenge the whole camp as soon as he entered the beast dimension. Overall the conversations is stilted and feels unnatural, no interaction with the 'scenery' or background characters. (nothing gets described or interacted with and he almost never speaks with anyone) Look for another story, this MC is to stupid it hurts.

the mc deserved to die for being so stupid, after almost dying after fighting too many he still pulls too many enemies. It would make more sense to ambush small groups of enemies. The whole part with Ellie is cringe, his way of talking and acting is stupid and feels strange, why not both hunt a bit and get to know each other? This just feels forced and unnatural.