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ryfulrifle

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle4mth
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    Nekos! I love nekos!! Nekos are the cutest!!!

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Setn_Sin

    glad you think so lol. conan is the bug existence, imagine a teenager outsmarting your intelligence agencies... gotta mess with him a bit!

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Phi0fany_11531

    thanks for reading ^^

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    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to GodofTheSpear

    ty for reading ^^;

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to GodofTheSpear

    thanks for reading <3 I prefer the Japanese names, sorry

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Lord_Disaster

    nope, not this one

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    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Genzk

    done on purpose :) reveal is coming soon!

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Littleplotter

    nono! its just me being picky on my preferences. though I'm not sure what about your previous edit, I much prefer "blocks" of text. It helps me immerse and get in the flow better. for some paragraphs tho, (subjectively) its too abrupt and takes away from the scene, like an awkward or delayed cut in a film. But I don't even think there's even a set guidelines on paragraph spacing; nothing to quit over especially when you're doing so well!

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to America_Yea

    sorry, it wasn't my intention to make it seem that way—both the dual personality/crazyiness. the crazy comment he made was supposed to be sarcastic/jokingly~ as mentioned in another comment, ive personally prefer the having retain some of the original personality, to me it makes the crossing more realistic and immersive. input noted, never thought of it that way. if that's the case, ill try to skim/skip over mention of the original personality in the future. thanks to you too for reading!

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Ballad

    sorry, it wasn't my intention to make it seem that way! ive personally prefer the original personality, to me it makes the crossing more realistic and immersive. input noted, never thought of it that way. ill try to skim/skip over mention of the original personality in the future.

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Genzk

    thank you for the reply! means alot :) 👍

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    ryfulrifle1yr
    Replied to Bookish_Cat

    i may or may not have a total crush on vermouth

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle2yr
    Commented

    smack em like the asian broom discipline

    Ch 19 William’s Compromise [Part 1]
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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle2yr
    Commented

    use code j4b8173d and r1c4r01I for your next purchase on the internet for an limited time offer of 69% off!1!1!1!!

    Ch 14 Cheat Codes
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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 I’m Going Ahead First… Don’t Miss Me Too Much
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    ryfulrifle2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 I’m Going Ahead First… Don’t Miss Me Too Much
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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle3yr
    Posted

    Minor spoilers below. A blend of light novel light-hearted and comfiness with the usual system trope that is sure to give you a good laugh. Classic-isekai and pretty generic in the world-building, though I'm sure it's because the author doesn't have enough chapters to develop it even further (which also goes for the characters). I love the job-class twist... the strongest system is a shepherd. I can't help but imagine a herd of goats marching into a dungeon xD The pacing is great, really captures the slice of life-light novel isekai feel. Paragraphs and dialogue flow smoothly, but some scenes transitions feel a little abrupt (in the timeskips and status windows) but that's just me being nitpicky. Speaking of which, I'd like just a tad more description, especially regarding William's surroundings. I also felt that the goddess selection scene was dragged for a bit. All in all, the writing and general direction the story is headed towards is great. I've high hopes geared to some power-fanasty adventures and I'm sure you'll feel the same after reading. The goat Mama Ella is the GOAT. Keep up the good work author and good luck in Spirity! (**: I went into this expecting Eylon's degeneracy--err, that is his exceptional cultured tastes, and after reading I can assure you it's very well there :) Loli goddess, harem, goats, shamelessness and potential lewd scenes, you name it, Elyon delivers. (Double **: Do not lewd the goat, or have thoughts on lewding the goat.)

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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle3yr
    Commented

    DANGIT i knew it xD

    In that one year of drinking milk, William had gained four levels.
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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle3yr
    Commented

    the GOAT goat. farming xp of a goat!

    After having his fill, William softly patted his Mama Ella to tell her that he was done drinking her milk.
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  • ryfulrifle
    ryfulrifle3yr
    Commented

    PFFFTT why did i not expect that

    Ch 6 I’m Going To Fcking Dismantle You!
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