Good start, however a correction you should note in the op universe mermaids when they reach a certain age can change btwn tail and legs. Check the enies lobby arc for clarification

This chapter lost me. The MC's thought process makes no sense

Interesting premise but the plot feels rushed and too unrealistic. None of it is believable and the characters make no sense. Each character behaves abnormally

Not enough chapters to warrant let alone demand a subscription. Build your story first and then gain loyal followers honestly and legitimately.

Author please stop being lazy and sensitive, you can't hope to please everyone there will always be critics and haters. Write with confidence and arrogance as every writer should have

You've lost me now, the book has lost all logic and reason

Why does the mc act of character? Does he forget he's a bustard

Your thoughts are all over the place, it's difficult to understand what's going on

The MC sounds pathetic. I'm out

Is this star wars or GOT?

Good development 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌 👍 🙌 🙏 😌 👏 👌

More chapters please 🙏

This book has a slow progression and doesn't make any sense. I'm out

Wrong! Any reincarnated person would never belive in the citadel. Trust in them means quicker death

Direction your taking is wrong. The lanisters are the targaryen biggest enemy anyone who has deind to trust or work with them ends up dead

Can you be more specific

What happened is this dropped

Why are you ruining this book with useless plot that makes no sense both in the Star wars universe and harry potter universe? Force users can sense lies, time travel is forbidden and had death consequences when used in the way you're describing

Why do the Chinese authors feel the need to add their culture in cultures that a completely opposite. The olympian pantheon is similar to the nordic and Egyptian pantheon that's where this book should have continued. Eastern pantheon are too different to be mixing them together. The story now has a disconnect

What's with all the inconsistency it's frustrating