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Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to XAZVAPB0OTHBy vampire I assume that you meant Rogue. What she saw wasn't all of his memories, but 'bits and pieces' exactly like it was written. It would have been explained further that she didn't see anything that would reveal him reading Marvel as a comic/movie or anything that would point to it. This event will be an integral part of their relationship as the story goes on, that is why only parts of her, seen in the memories are highlighted. It is of your opinion that it's a mistake but it was a deliberate act on my part and I will not be changing it. Even after seeing and thinking of it because of your review. Thank you for taking the time to read.
- Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to XAZVAPB0OTHCh 10 Chapter 10: Memory
- Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Adam_YOUR_God
For the first point, I don't think an auxiliary chapter is necessary. The mc will explore his powers and ways to use it. I will too, I don't believe that I've found every way to use it and readers will probably give me ideas I haven't thought of that I'll use. The basic explanations of his ability will come in a few more chapters and you can probably imagine the level it can reach. But just because you're going the extra mile I'll tell you the bare minimum is fighting Arishem. And yes, he will look hot asf in the future.
Sending a blast of air towards the door, Storm walked in, followed by Scott and then Jean. In front of them a black haired, average-looking high schooler is sprawled on the floor. His sweat soaking shirt and pajamas, fortunately he didn't manage to piss himself. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Adam_YOUR_God
I’ll actually try that and edit them. Thanks
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Heh maybe. The potential mentioned here isn’t purely comparing their mutant abilities but overall since Hugo got something else.
These conjectures and theories about Hugo's ability all seemingly accurate based on past evidence. Little did they know the potential and ability of Hugo although similar to Darwin, is greatly different, his potential dwarfing the latter's by quite a large margin. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Alchemist_
HAHAHA, you made me laugh so hard. I’m dead.
'Shit!' Cursed one of the multiple hidden agents in the area. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to ANANTA
Uhhh, this is a lot. Thanks for the details. Didn’t even know about superpower wiki. I learned a bunch. Still the mc’s power is a little different but pretty similar to all this.
They miraculously achieved to free themselves out of the Mirror Dimension albeit accidently without any magical means. An oversight on her part others would have to pay for. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Dieudonner_17Ch 2 Chapter 2: Vision
- Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to JoyousRebellion
I’ll just say the power is limited to the word Immunity. Also I haven’t read Worm so if the ability does look familiar to it, just know it’s accidental and I didn’t get inspiration from it.
The initial reading of Cerebro regarding Hugo's potential while the Professor was using it, is different that what is it now. Increasing little by little every single day, one number at a time. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Adiavts
True true
The fact that a mutant of lower capacity and potential controlling her should be enough of a motivation. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to batman_3_3_
Yeah
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Nah
Finally in the middle, sat on couches a girl he doesn't recall or not included in his memories. She has black hair and black eyes. (A/N: Original Character) - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Adiavts
I looked it up again, I see I misunderstood. Thanks for pointing it out, I will correct it.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to EzioAuditore_1Ch 1 Chapter 1: Seven
- Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to EzioAuditore_1Ch 1 Chapter 1: Seven
- Hidden_Throne11mthReplied to Rick_S4nchezCh 2 Chapter 2: Vision