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Makima8mthCommentedmuscles can be squish easily if relaxed
She closes the distance and places a hand on my chest before trying to squeeze it only to find muscle does not squish as easily. I smirk and it sets her off more as she frowns but the frown disappears as I slip a hand onto her lower back. I tug her forward and against me before leaning down and taking her lips once more.- Makima1yrCommented
not taylor the predator
"Maybe…" Taylor replied ambiguously. - Makima1yrCommented
after all that she gotta be bald
Jenna touched her hair and said, "Let's go. I need to get to the salon and change my hair colour back." - Makima1yrCommented
Take all my stones
"Oh. The idiots huh." I muttered as I stood face to face with them. - Makima1yrCommented
ofc
(A/N: I'll be taking a break on the weekends as I mentioned before. I will be busy this weekend, so I'll appreciate it if you can show me support when I'm not posting. I'll come back on Monday after the powerstone reset.) - Makima1yrCommentedCh 14 Chapter 14: Pilot begins.
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Imo this is the best modern family fanfic rn. it's not like other modern family fics, it made me laugh a few times reading this. the relationship with the main cast doesn't seem forced. the world background is pretty good too. story development wise I have no complaints. unlike other modern family fanfics on here, it's not cringe
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Pig? really??
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bro reminds me of power lol
"Ugh, it takes nothing like what you just explained to me!" - Makima1yrReplied to OniisamaThis book has been deleted.
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Ngl she's too goody for me so i didn't like her that much
This book has been deleted. - Makima1yrCommented'I already told you there would be punishment if you kept testing me.' James thought as he warmed the sunscreen. 'That's strike two. I'll just remind her who the alpha is in this relationship.'
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Ikr the other fanfics that does this are creepy asf
(MC still has no romantic interest in her, she is 5 years old and he sees her more as someone to protect and love, not love romantically) - Makima1yrCommented
just give the woman what she wants lol
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Tough love
Hera looked at her husband, her eyes widening, while Zeus lifted her in his arms, carrying her to the bedroom, kissing her. - Makima1yrCommented
after reading 100 chapters it became boring tbh
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man is the male version of mary sue
Moony followed him as they left and closed the door. "OH!" Whitney Frost just realised she was still wearing Hector's coat, she took it off, feeling the weight behind every medal on it was too much for her. She couldn't help but curse herself, "Eeeek... STUPID! STUPID! STUPID Whitney, how could I even think of corrupting him? He's a perfect man, with no flaws." - Makima1yrCommented
oh it's her
"It was I who had the idea to rotate the frequencies used by the Allies to send coded messages across enemy lines. I made Isodyne Energy prominent with my patented inventions." She told him everything about herself, from her childhood to now. - Makima1yrCommented
kinky
A bitch like her deserves to be punished. - Makima1yrPosted
Writing quality could use some improvement and editing, switching pov so suddenly makes it so annoying, and the story flow is kinda boring with the constant mention of useless things makes me want to drop it the moment I read the first chapter, it's a long chapter yet it nothing happens, to be honest, world background is ok. It's an ok read overall Maybe use Grammarly or watch a YT video about how to make the flow of the story better and the pov change better.