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Thanks for the great review
Can’t afford to lose her but risk having her leave by demoting her. If being brain dead was a person
Nice story so far but the spacing is somewhat of an issue although not too serious
Author here, shamelessly reviewing my own book. First of all, thanks for taking the time to read this book, I promise you won’t be disappointed. Please leave comments as to any questions you might have.
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The word count limit didn’t allow me to convey what I wanted to the fullest. Like I was saying, just like how his name has been ingrained to his mind that foggy memory can’t stop him from knowing what it is, Avery has been training for a very long time and one of the things he learned is the effect of oxygen and good air flow is to the body. As such, he knows instinctively what happens when someone has little air/oxygen supply and how the sky is such places where little oxygen supply is prevalent
So you’ve read one of the best written stories too
Author here, thought I’d give myself my first review after publishing the first chapter. Please leave your honest thoughts on the story. If you love it let me know, if you hate it let me know and if you feel indifferent then let me know too as feedback will help me improve on the content going forward. Anyway, please support and thanks for taking your time to read