Ecchi_cloud

ok sorry but the whole death qi thing is absurd for an anime world . it would be better to say energy or aura instead

is this some odd translation or something because I don't remember those navy rankings in One Piece

not to criticize but it feels a bit like a cop out for Euron to survive and get away

let me clarify I meant Weiss and Yangs overall abilities in combat not as swordsmen

this is a general comment not a disparaging remark. It personally makes little sense for someone with the Mcs abilities, background, and potential to summon virtually anyone that they would have only a single partner rather than a harem, even a small one. I'm not saying monogamous relationships are wrong nor am I wholly supporting polygamous relationships, but I believe that with so many female options a random oc as the sole love interest leaves much to be desired

I don't believe for a second that Geralt couldn't defeat the Night King especially with a holy sword much less Caliburn. So this fight is sus

you know if you are confused or dissatisfied with something in the original story you could always make adjustments to the details without changing the overall content of the story. if that's not enough you could always take some creative liberties with the story and make it heavily inspired by the original instead of a few direct translation.

my adorable Ikaros

tobirama

honestly I love the story of Tsukimichi and it would be amazing if you could incorporate that as a world the MC has access to