Opasiris

I think this change in the plot is perfect. You don't need to openly follow only the enemies that the worlds the protagonist goes to provide you. The truth is that it seems better to me that 'Earth' is their enemy for the moment and probably some other transmigrants from other worlds with the same system, but it all depends on you, author. If you have the plot planned and already done, continue with it.

It's pretty good, Sasuke's interpersonal relationships are highlighted too much and that's the best. The Uchiha's are the ones they love the most.

In one day I have read the entire novel and I can simply say 'A gem'

Hey author, I hope everything is fine and if it's bad I hope it gets better soon, if you need time you should take it, staying calm is the best option to avoid ruining this story

en este caso se utilizaría " Vaya "

For now I really like the development that the protagonist has had in his mental areas, even though I would have liked the training arc to be longer and more detailed since it was super important and I really wouldn't get bored reading how little by little he improves not only in his martial arts if not also in his mental faculties. I really like the current relationship he has with Raven, it gives that extra humorous touch to the novel.

Esdras?

Me gustó bastante la estructura del desarrollo del protagonista y la forma en que sus relaciones con los demás integrantes del canon va mejorando, es interesante ver tus planes. Puedo decir que hasta ahora tu novela es muy buena y me encanta que el protagonista a pesar de ser op, no lo sea instantáneamente.