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LiLBoyHatake

LiLBoyHatake

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2019-07-16 JoinedAscension Island
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake1yr
    Commented

    Praise be to The Fool!

    Ch 46 Ritualistic Magic
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy ¡ Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake1yr
    Commented
    The test is to kill your girlfriend Sophie in cold blood. 
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games ¡ Raj_Shah_7152
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake1yr
    Commented
    Max kept chatting and absentmindedly shoveling dirt, unaware of the fact that one of the three pieces of his destiny that the angel Hazriel had shown him in the vision, laid right beneath him at this moment. 
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games ¡ Raj_Shah_7152
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake1yr
    Replied to GifflarGod

    Yea theres 0 depth to her rn

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    MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God
    Games ¡ Hamapo
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake1yr
    Commented

    No inspection of the property? Didnt even look at the financial model of the business?

    Theo took the contract and they went to meet a lawyer to make things official. After busing himself all morning with the contract.
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    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban ¡ StarryForestJaguar
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    This doesnt make sense, he has had a good atitude for the last 18 chaps. Throwing this in so quickly just makes it seem like ur scrambling for some type of conflict

    "I don't care! If I ordered you to heal me, then you have to heal me," Shay asserted with a furious look on his face.
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    Gods' Impact Online
    Games ¡ NoWoRRyMaN
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Please use past tense!!!!

    With his new gear, Cain is getting quite confident in his chances of making big money today in the second dungeon. He didn't really want to share the loot with anyone, so he plans to try the first run alone. After all, at level 10 he got a third golem from his [Summon Lesser Golem] spell.
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    Reincarnated With A Summoning System
    Fantasy ¡ Aoki_Aku
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Really cliche sl far. Already forgetting the main plot is that the MC idles and becomes op.

    Looking at the pitiful state of the Princess. She couldn't help as her maternal instincts rang out.
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    My Idle Gaming System
    Games ¡ Adui
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Replied to BenjiP

    They arent even out of highschool, and have never hung out outside of school. Its not love, its an obsession

    "I dare you to say another word about her."
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy ¡ Awespec
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    I feel like the MC is going to end up being an emotional baby

    Ch 17 Abilities
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy ¡ Awespec
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Why does he start feeling pity now? I feel like this is just dumb

    Ch 12 Mayan Temple (4)
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy ¡ Awespec
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Replied to Sajan_Sivaharan

    Hes gone 3 days without sleep and is injured. I think the spaniard would win.

    However, this wasn't an anime. No matter how good a mortal swordsman was, there was a limit to how well they could respond to wild movements, especially when their attacker was so much stronger than them.
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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy ¡ Awespec
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Posted

    I love the novel, I am currently at Ch 80, and it appears that the Mc is losing what made me interested in him in the first place. He is starting to help for no reason like a valiant hero, and the author keeps saying that he lacks empathy and the such, but its very clear that he’s helping people just to help. I am mostly wondering if he goes back to being ruthless or if he stays like this.

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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern ¡ KevinAscending
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Wasnt he searchibg for mei mei 😂😂

    Ch 37 Chapter 37: Meeting Her
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern ¡ KevinAscending
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    I thought the point of the novel was that he did everything he wanted?

    Ch 33 Chapter 33: Will, Void, & Weapon
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern ¡ KevinAscending
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Please dont turn him into a hero, i started reading because the bio said he was ruthless

    Ch 28 Chapter 28: Thieves & Chase
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern ¡ KevinAscending
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    Sounds a lot like Guild Wars especially with the server wide announcements.

    Ch 5 Necromancer's Hideout
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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master
    Games ¡ Raj_Shah_7152
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Posted

    Started really good, but now the MC has made almost no progress in 300 chapters. I’m now just skipping a lot of chapters as they don’t add anything. The Mc has stayed in the same sect and realm for 320 chapters. Really boring.

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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games ¡ Snoring_Panda
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Posted

    I have a lot to work on, and right now I am not even 10 chapters into the story. But I feel that this is a unique story that has yet to appear. I could be wrong though, and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated, and considered. Thanks, Hatake.

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    Immortal's Pantheon
    Fantasy ¡ LiLBoyHatake
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  • LiLBoyHatake
    LiLBoyHatake2yr
    Commented

    She must want money... Right?

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy ¡ CrimsonWolfAuthor
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