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Also is later chapters when he spars with Yamato he states he has the gravity seal at 100x which makes him same power lvl as Goku when he arrived at Namek.

Strong start with the story and power scaling but after a while author decided to throw that out of the window and wanted DBZ lvl gravity training and power scaling. The whole Gravity training kinda breaks the jutsu logic since rock lee had weights and even if you say he cant power the seal since he sucks at those kind of things the power needed fuel the seal would be astronomical. I feel like the chakra strain would be at least 10x Kakashis sharingan just to double the gravity.

dont get butt hurt take my criticism and improve. What i meant is that your text looks like it has been copy and pasted without editing how the lines and structures shows up on the site. Therefore this is low effort copy and paste

0 effort copy and paste text. Fixt the writing and editing...............................................................................................

I kinda like this story but you should make one chapter that the beginning where you explain the world little bit (things like how did harry get there how long has he been there etc.) Also your way of releasing chapters is very bad. I understand cutting chapters but at least release full chapter worth at once instead 1/5 of chapter where reading it alone feels pointless and waste of time.

i like the idea of the story but writing needs allot of polishing. The first chapters are badly written and you have taken scenes word from word from books/tv which contradict the parts you have written. Characters talk like the mc doesnt exists and keep yapping with their original dialogue which throws off the story.

One of better harry Potter fanfics. The writing quality is great and chapter length is nice. Hopefully you keep writing and dont abandon it

This started interesting but power scaling is too much. He hasn't even finished first year and he is basically +newt lvl. Story gets really boring when he is growing this fast. I kinda hoped he was couple years older so he could be mentor for younger students. This would fix somewhat the power issue. If the current pace continues MC will be able to oneshot Voldemort when he shows up 4th year.

Translation is very bad. Chinese names weirdly translated terms etc. Do not recommend .............................................................

I have enjoyed the story so far. I hope you keep writing the story. Not sure what kind of plan you have for future story but i hope you dont make mc too OP.