Hey just saying I want to edit out all the grammar and what not on my profile on this site. It most likely wont be 100% accurrate but I'll try my best if anyone wants to read it over there. I do ask that I will only edit what is already on webnovel as a whole unless I get the original authors permission to translate like this guy has. If not I will only be editing the 472 chapters here already.

THE FOURTH WALL!!!! IT JUST GOT ATOMIZED INTO OBLIVION!!!! ... p.s.: very good story so far.

even though i just started reading this fic, i have to say that so far it is one of the best ones i've read that have a inuzuka for a main oc. the only thing i could ask is if you could add a separate chapter describing his current power and a description of his abilities/jutsus. if you could also include a similar description for his ninken, i would be grateful.

Yes please continue.

Another thing, if you take recommendations, you should try reading these ones: The Tale Of Natsu Dragneel Vol I Power Of The Dragon By: Azza1608 https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12308587/1/The-Tale-Of-Natsu-Dragneel-Vol-I-Power-Of-The-Dragon there is more than one vol. by the author though this one i think is the best personally. The Fire Dragon Prince By: Angryhenry https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12373351/1/The-Fire-Dragon-Prince These are two of my favorites from fanfiction.net I also have a lot of good crossover fanfics for fairy tail i could recommend if you are interested in reading them.

One more thing, since you're posting this fanfic, after you finish with the last chapter from the author, are you going to continue the fic or stop? It's was sad the author never continued it, and I think it would be interesting to see what you could do for a continuation. it used to be one of my favorite fairy tail fanfics.

“Before the attack” Suna council: Kazekage, what should we do?!! Kazekage: either fight or run. “After the attack” Kazekage: ......welp. we’re all gonna die.

Sasuke: did big brother notice me? -Meanwhile in heaven- Kami: RIP Sasuke, better luck next time.

That’s when hanzo knew.........he ****ed up.🤣

And that’s how you leave a hostile village like a boss!