Not bad ig

Reasoning: In the novel they were discarded even though their use was teased by the author. I always found it a pity.

Servants+1

Keep up the good work. This ff is healing my eyes.

No one is dad mat at their first. Plus considering your hypocrisy you might be in for some horrible future. Toughen up. Life isn't fair so you better work on yourself, your decisions and their consequenses before it slaps you and you blame others instead of yourself. Like what happened with...Kimi was her name.

Something feels off in the social dynamic of the office. Even with the hinted office troubles. Can't put my finger on it though. thanks for the chap!

Well written so far. Chapters could be 2 pages longer and maybe using a cliffhanger or two might be good. Some things exceed common sense character developement but I'll account that to creative freedom of you as an author. Personally I'd have darkened the MC personality a tiny bit(Cruel repeating treatments by the elite i.e.). Developing him into a more dominating confident personality might be a good direction to follow, but I really like it so far. Nothing is too out of order. Copied my comment. Godspeed.

Well written so far. Chapters could be 2 pages longer and maybe using a cliffhanger or two might be good. Some things exceed common sense character developement but I'll account that to creative freedom of you as an author. Personally I'd have darkened the MC personality a tiny bit(Cruel repeating treatments by the elite i.e.). Developing him into a more dominating confident personality might be a good direction to follow, but I really like it so far. Nothing is too out of order. 4/5 stars imo.

same

i hot it probably... Maybe? $=S ^=e (exponent) #=x (Double cross/hashtag)?

Picked up again.... Ves improved his personality from beta to a closet-beta but... Gloriana is still a c***. Ves has every reason to get rid of her. 1. She's a narcist 2. She's not trustworthy(whistleblew in him) 3. She tries to undermime his authority in the clan 4. She tries to bring harmful elements into the clan 5. She can't take steps back in an argument 6. She has a repressed violent character 7. She is emotionally unstable well... I imagine there are 2 outcomes that may happen: The good one is Ves beeing aware and using her until her and her states strength are no danger anymore. The Bad one (and i speak from personal mistakes/experience) is Ves entering an abusive marriage and beeing repressed, violated and abused by his wife plus mother to become a submissive dolllike 'boy'.