Review Detail of RHShavi in Ultimate NTR System

Well written so far. Chapters could be 2 pages longer and maybe using a cliffhanger or two might be good. Some things exceed common sense character developement but I'll account that to creative freedom of you as an author. Personally I'd have darkened the MC personality a tiny bit(Cruel repeating treatments by the elite i.e.). Developing him into a more dominating confident personality might be a good direction to follow, but I really like it so far. Nothing is too out of order. Copied my comment. Godspeed.