been a hot minute

not a huge fan of Yandaree stuff. mentaly taxing

so dumb omg

dude i would love it if she actually managed to kill him. would help him sort out his brain abit

writing quality is a step above a lot of other novels on this app but it still can be improved, for example it is hard to tell weather his thoughts are voiced or spoken internally causing confusion occasionally. not bad. but can be improved the story takes a few common tropes and trys moderately successfully to mesh them together into something coherent. teenager scarring and murdering hundreds of hardened criminals and dieing to be tranmigrated into a game he used to play when he was younger. apparently avidly. the type of game seems reminicent of dating sims where different combinations of interations cause new outcomes in the endings. it also grabbed the trope of unremarkable side character/villan being the one reincarnated as. consequently the characters are 2 dimensional at the start of the story. what you get at first is probably what youll get later on as well. i recommend but the first few chapters are forced and a bit cringe at times.

first chapter is he gets the system. second chapter is he gets unearned Op skills. a whole list of then. then a arbitrary number for skilk points with no idea for valuation. if you got a system today. and you saw your first misson say 10,000 skill points would you think thats high? probably is if your refrence point is 1 skill point raises your stats by 1 each. but there is no other information given that tells us that its high other than our MC just saying "oh, thats a high reward" how does he know? is there a universal power scale? if you want a brain dead novel read. this is for you

everyone gets a wish. its pushed to start with as very overpowered and very open ended. no wish twisting, just a simple what do you want. what the synopsis doesnt tell you is at integration there is a balance that caps everyone at level 1 of the power ceiling. so if you wished. i want to be a god, you then get nerfed to level 1 brand with powers of a slightly stronger human. i feel baited. writing quality is not great. characters are 1 dimentional and seem to be focused on bad anime character tropes. there's no world building. author seems to be projecting his/her own emotions into their characters. i hope they gets some help if so. i dont recommend but try if you like

huh

i hate her so very much but the relationship of her and ves grows on you lol

happy 666

oi mister author. are you going to overvoid gary. seems to be where your leading us

comments get thin this many chapters in damb

felt a bit out of character for our MC

would have been a bit more interesting if the maid died. so far its cliche

I was bamboozled. the title said checkpoint system. i was thinking spawn point time loops. damb kinda disappointed. just another rewritten story with new names for the skills and people

well then

samur has met his match lol

maybe much like his human side being an emulsifier so too does his spell have one to mix the spells together.

yo happy day of the birth my man

that wasnt his argument tho. he just wants to be involved in something he created himself. she wants to do it herself